User talk:Margiehealy

Korbel Champagne Cellars article
Hello, I see that you are attempting to improve the Korbel article. While we certainly appreciate the help, there are several issues with your recent edits that will need to be address. For starters I recommend reviewing Your first article which gives a good overview of the Wikipedia editing process. Secondly, I would review our policies on maintaining a neutral point of view and avoiding advert-sounding languages. For wine specific topics, the wine project has drafted an essay Wikipedia is not a wine guide to give an idea of what types of things are appropriate for an encyclopedia entry. Finally, I would review our policy on reliable sources and how to properly format and cite those sources. Being new, you may find it beneficial to experiment on a rough draft article in your userspace such as User:Margiehealy/Korbel Champagne Cellars. After you have crafted your article, you could post a note on the Talk:Korbel Champagne Cellars or at the Wine Project page asking for outside views or assistance of your proposed article. Taking these steps will insure the liklihood that your edits fall within Wikipedia's guidelines and policy and will improve the overall article. Again, we appreciate the enthusiasm and look forward to your contributions. AgneCheese/Wine 23:54, 14 August 2008 (UTC)