User talk:Margtim97/sandbox


 * "Suricate is a threesome of french humorists" : French with the capital letter
 * "Those four are a part of the ten writers" : I don't know about the "a" here. I wouldn't have used the article.
 * "by the Group M6" : "by M6 Group" I think
 * "the group announces that the Group Suricate" : "Suricate group" ?
 * "because of some “artistics disputes”" : "artistic dispute", the adjective doesn't change
 * "The comeback of the Suricate’s videos is finnaly announced" : "finally"
 * "during the Comic Con 2015 of Paris" : I'd say "during Comic Con Paris 2015"
 * "to be then put online on Youtube" : "and then are put online on Youtube" I'd say
 * About the dates in general : in writing, it's more usual to simply write "15 January 2013" for example.

Flrncgx (talk) 21:30, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

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 * When you mention the website D-funny or die, I think it is simply called Funny or die, without the letter d
 * You have written finnaly instead of finally

That's it I think

Melodylmb (talk) 05:47, 8 May 2018 (UTC) Melodylmb (talk) 05:47, 8 May 2018 (UTC)

Besides what has been pointed out already
 * The festival they were invited to is called "Montreux Comedy Festival" in English
 * For dates, even if already mentionned, pay attention not to confuse the uses of "in" (for months) and "on" (for precise dates)
 * You wrote "The Golden Shaw" instead of show
 * There was some tenses inconsistencies towards the end of the text : "announced - would" since the action and "was" instead of is
 * I would write "one hour and a quarter" instead of "one hour quart"

Mayduc (talk) 14:02, 15 May 2018 (UTC)