User talk:Maria.Au20/K-Beauty/Ellass22 Peer Review

Hello Maris. Ellass22 (talk) 08:13, 22 October 2020 (UTC) I see that you have added a lot to the K-Beauty page, and divided different contents into different sections. I think your edition helped me think more about how I can added more aspects to my assigned articles. I think the last paragraph of the first section talks a lot about the impact of K-Beauty on the society including people's beauty standard, and other social movements. I think it will be a good idea to also separate this part into a small section. Maybe "the impact of K-Beauty". This will make the page more organized and simple.