User talk:Mariaalto/sandbox

12/4/18 Evaluation by User:AFpsu1
Spelling/Grammar Meets Expectations Spelling/Grammar is good overall. There are a few small things I would change, but nothing major. After the phrase, "A popular display is the Palace Armoury, a collection of arms located at the Grandmaster's Palace in Valletta", I would probably use a semicolon or a dash such as "-". Also in the sentence, "Because of this, along with reduced levels of service, has led to people using private transportation", the phrasing could be changed here. I might say, "Because of this, along with reduced levels of service, people have begun using private transportation." Just a suggestion. Everything else looks good.

Language Meets Expectations All of the language here looks good to me.

Organization Meets Expectations All of your paragraphs are nicely organized with an appropriate header. I like that you used bullet points in the "Sports" section. Looks a lot more organized than if you had simply listed them.

Coding Meets Expectations I think your coding meets expectations, but for some reason, a couple of your sources have red text next to them that says "check date values". However, when I click the links, they do still work and lead me to the correct website. This has happened to me before in the past as well, and even during this third edit, and I had to go in and make sure the dates for my sources were correct and it fixed it.

Validity

Meets Expectations Your information seems accurate and valid.

Completion Meets Expectations You do have five paragraphs, so your edit meets expectations. You could elaborate a little bit more - maybe on the architecture under your art section. However I don't think that this is completely necessary.

Relevance Meets Expectations Your topic is relevant.

Sources Meets Expectations You have exactly 20 sources - the required amount for this assignment. Good job!

Citations Meets Expectations Your citations look good. It is really helpful that you included so many links within your paragraphs to help better describe certain terms.

References Nearly Meets Expectations You have the minimum required amount of references, just make sure to check on those references with the red text, and try to edit those references so that the red text goes away. Other than that they check out!

/* 12/4/18 Evaluation by User:B_am_240 */

Spelling/Grammar Meets Expectations. Overall, no spelling errors and grammar is overall good, though it does need a quick final edit. It's a small note but I would change the word "simpler" to "more simple for tourists" or something along those lines.

Language Meets Expectations. You use a clear and informative voice.

Organization Meets Expectations. Your page has a nice flow to it and manages to touch on a good amount of information on a not-so-known destination. I also agree with the last peer review, the use of bullet points was really nice and easy to read.

Coding Meets Expectations.

Validity Meets Expectations. All information was nicely used and everything seemed relevant.

Completion Meets Expectations. Besides a final edit for grammar errors, this page looks ready to go!

Relevance Meets Expectations. The topic is relevant.

Sources Meet Expectations. You got your required number of sources and all of them seem credible and accurate.

Citations Meet Expectations.

References Meet Expectations.

Nice Job! B am 240 (talk) 03:09, 6 December 2018 (UTC)

12/6/2018 Evaluation by Dlewis16
Good work!

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Expectations Overall it reads well! I think that there could be a few touch ups made to just make it read a little smoother but grammatically it looks pretty good.

Language
Meets Expectations I noticed a few contractions here and there, but otherwise, the language seems good.

Organization
Exceeds Expectations Everything is in the right place!

Coding
Meets Expectations Coding is good. Wikilinks are there and working and citations are mostly good though I could not directly click on a few of the links but I am not sure if that has something to do with coding.

Validity
Exceeds Expectations Your info seems correct, great, and very interesting!

Completion
Exceeds Expectations You have more than enough citations and paragraphs. Very good.

Relevance
Exceeds Expectations Everything seems relevant to me and fits the requirements as well.