User talk:Mariagmm

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-- 18:08, Monday, May 9, 2016 (UTC)

Welcome to The Wikipedia Adventure!

 * Hi Mariagmm! We're so happy you wanted to play to learn, as a friendly and fun way to get into our community and mission.  I think these links might be helpful to you as you get started.
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-- 18:08, Monday, May 9, 2016 (UTC)

Your contributions to Water supply and sanitation in Ghana
Dear Mariagmm,

thank you for your contributions to Water supply and sanitation in Ghana, shown here. It seems that these are your first edits on Wikipedia. As the author of large sections of the above article, please allow me to make a few suggestions. First, you highlight the activities by a single NGO, WaterAid. This is fine, but I suggest to do this in a separate sub-section under "External cooperation" rather than in the lead section of the article. Highlighting the work of one organization in the lead section can easily be perceived as a public relations effort, and Wikipedia is not the place to raise the profile of a company or a charity, no matter what the merits of its work. Furthermore, the information you added is to a large extent general information about the health impact of poor water supply and sanitation and is not specific to Ghana. Therefore, I am not sure if it belongs in this article. Third, you talk about "the community" without specifying which community you have in mind. Fourth, there are a number of typos in the text you added. Rather than removing some of the text you added I wanted to give you a chance to re-edit your contributions yourself and/or to respond to my comments here or on the talk page of the article.--Mschiffler (talk) 08:04, 22 May 2016 (UTC)

Welcome to The Wikipedia Adventure!

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-- 13:03, Saturday, May 28, 2016 (UTC)

Welcome to The Wikipedia Adventure!

 * Hi Mariagmm! We're so happy you wanted to play to learn, as a friendly and fun way to get into our community and mission.  I think these links might be helpful to you as you get started.
 * The Wikipedia Adventure Start Page
 * The Wikipedia Adventure Lounge
 * The Teahouse new editor help space
 * Wikipedia Help pages

-- 13:04, Saturday, May 28, 2016 (UTC)