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Editing for Paul's Case Page: Article Evaluation

I felt the summary of the Story Paul's Case was very wordy- The Mentioning of Paul's meeting with his teachers and the mention of his mother dying- It feels almost like the events should be in order and it is okay to leave more things out.

The symbolism section- The article evaluates the Flowersin the story as a way of Paul looking for the beauty in life, it differs from what was talked about in class. We found the flowers as a foreshadowing and way of showing Paul's defiant nature.

The Symbolism of Paul's Suicide, I found this part of the article actually very interesting. I believe this evaluation of the method of suicide was gone over but to understand he chose the train over the gun because of how much he hated his father was very eye opening.

In reading the literary criticism of the story- I can see how it can be debated Paul was actually gay- Certain moments in the story can be interpreted as this.

I was very surprised to see the amount of articles cited for the article- There are not a huge amount of quoted areas in the sections.

Mariah.buenano222 (talk) 03:51, 18 April 2018 (UTC)Mariah.buenano222