User talk:Mariahfaithh/sandbox

Lily's peer review
-Information added is good and relevant -Second sentence of second paragraph ("Mendelian inheritance is known as...") is unclear -First paragraph relies heavily on one source -A few grammar/spelling mistakes, ex: "genetical" in first paragraph -Consider omitting phrase "is known as" in at least a couple places - it's used a bit heavily -"Many organisms possess two genes..." could be a good place to expand; what's different in other organisms? Lmelmore (talk) 01:09, 18 November 2017 (UTC)

Mariah's reply to your peer review of my paper

Thank you very much. This helped me so much. I fixed the spelling and grammar that was wrong. I also changed the second sentence in second paragraph. I omitted some of the "is known as" statements. Mariahfaithh (talk) 03:55, 29 November 2017 (UTC)