User talk:Mariana Madera/Adam Ray (comedian)/Psun23 Peer Review

Hey, I want to thank for her careful and helpful work on the peer review. I totally agree that the new lead is much better and I also agree with her suggestions to expand and reorganize the early life section, especially if you can find additional information (older sources might be good for this, though they might not be as easy to find via Google search, maybe try filtering the search results by time). I also agree that there are some places where you can clean up your tone to make sure it keeps a neutral point of view and to make sure that the sections of your article are correctly formatted. Finally, I think that adding images to an article is a great way to contribute but I caution you to inform yourself about Wikipedia's norms around images and copyright before you go looking for an image. Groceryheist (talk) 19:21, 3 February 2021 (UTC)