User talk:Mariana Madera/sandbox

Hi, nice work so far on your article. I see that you've added a new section on Adam's personal life and you've also expanded the lead. Your changes so far look a little bit rough around the edges so I suggest you put some more effort into your WP:encyclopedic tone. I'm also not sure why you added [edit] to the titles of the sections on his acting and voice and acting credits.

Given that you're working on an article about somebody who has a pretty extensive CV, but doesn't seem to catch a lot of press, it makes sense that you'd draw on sources like interviews for you article. However, I see that you're also referencing youtube videos which might not be considered a wp:reliable source see the policy about user generated content in particular. Maybe the videos point you to other sources of information that can be considered reliable?

Finally, if you're not sure what else you might be able to add to your article, I suggest that you look to articles about similar topics for inspiration. Maybe there is another voice actor with a well-developed Wikipedia article that you can find?

Overall it seems like you're making good progress. I encourage you to try to add some more information soon before we head into peer review so that you can get the best possible feedback. I'm really excited to see how you article will develop! Groceryheist (talk) 01:16, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

Peer reviews
Hi, I left a comment on 's peer review of your article. Please reach out to me when you're ready for more feedback or if you think you're ready to make your article live by publishing in the main space. Groceryheist (talk) 22:55, 4 February 2021 (UTC)