User talk:Marianjcarr

Marian, You fixed a few things, but the wording in the beginning (This film validates expressive art in medical settings can build doctor-patient relationships and be a supportive companion in the healing process) is awkward. The film validates that expressive art can build... Also, you fixed a few little agreement matters but still left off periods before citations. A good job, but I don't think it's above a 94. KBR Beresrogers (talk) 20:02, 6 December 2010 (UTC)