User talk:Mariawaqar/sandbox

From what I have read from the talk page, I will take into account when implementing change onto this current article.

I will be adding additional information to the Introduction of Lauren Graham's article. There currently is only a sentence.

For the picture, I will be updating the picture to a latest picture of her and only one that is appealing than the one posed up.

For early years, there is a lot of grammar issues, that I will be revising. I will also be adding new information to that section.

As for the career section, again there are a lot of grammar issues that I will edit. I will add more information that comes from reliable sources. Also, some information posted is not true, I will delete that and replace it with true information. Also, I will update that section with the latest on Lauren Graham's career moves. Furthermore, the information in the Career section is not sectioned properly. I will organize the information in a way that is more appealing to read for the reader.

Finally, the personal life section of the current article only devotes a sentence to her personal life. I will add more information in that section.

here is the link to my sandbox: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mariawaqar/sandbox