User talk:Marinarasauce21/Invisible disability

Hi User:Marinarasauce21

I think this is a good start to your article it's brief and straight to the point so far. It is very interesting and I wonder if you thought about either adding brief article instances/cases where it has happened in schools as a sub-heading. I like that you added links to the ADA and the rehabilitation act which I did not know of and I think you should add a couple more. I think you should add more references to your article. In this line, "Since the passing of legislature to protect students with disabilities, colleges and universities have implemented policies to accommodate students with disabilities" be specific on what policies have they accommodated and I think the legislature should be legislation in this sentence. If you want you can leave this sentence alone and add a subheading of the policies that they accommodate to the students. Change 'prior to' to before, and add a comma before and after therefore. Yonna95 (talk) 19:30, 14 April 2020 (UTC)