User talk:Mariposa678/sandbox

You have a lot more work to do to get to that first draftRJBazell (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 21:03, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

I think this is a good start! I think it could use more information on HIV prevalence in non-high risk populations as well as an age breakdown. I also think there may be something wrong with your references #5 and 6 because there appears to be no text there. I'd also be curious to know more about how the illegal drug trade affected HIV/AIDS in Colombia. Branfordbulldogs (talk) 18:45, 9 November 2017 (UTC)

Great start!! What I think would be useful is more information on the history as well as the current status of HIV/AIDS in Colombia.Imanirichardson (talk) 20:14, 9 November 2017 (UTC)

I think that this is great progress! I would suggest adding more information about the needle and syringe program, such as the impact that it has had. Also, more information in regards to the most at risk groups that you had listed. Studenta1 (talk) 05:28, 13 November 2017 (UTC)