User talk:Marissa.Ray

Your recent edits
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Hemostasis
Please do not be discouraged by the quickfail of Hemostasis at WP:GAN. I'd highly suggest you make sure you remove all the lists, replace them with prose, make sure every paragraph ends with citations that fully support the text, remove the stub tags and make sure the tag at the top is removed. Before renominating it again, I'd suggest you ask for a Peer Review from medical contributors on Wikipedia who can help you out with Wikipedia's more stringent citation requirements for medical articles. Lastly, I'd suggest you review the Good article criteria, discuss these on the talk page and make sure you feel every one of these points can be ticked off as passing before nominating again if you chose not to go through the peer review process. I've pasted them below to help. --LauraHale (talk) 02:43, 29 April 2012 (UTC)

What is a good article?
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Source here.