User talk:Marissa.lieberman

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Following this up, I've re-reviewed the page.

The article is promotional--we do not talk about the beautiful weather in LA and the "extraordinarily diverse student body" and suchlike--that's information appropriate for a web page or an advertisement, not an encyclopedia. We present the information about the program that a general reader might want, not a prospective student.

In addition, I do not think the various branches of NYFA are appropriate for separate articles--they are already mentioned in the main article.

I've listed it for speedy deletion as promotional.  DGG ( talk ) 05:09, 1 May 2013 (UTC)