User talk:Marissadiaz071/sandbox

Peer Review
So far, you have good information. There are a couple grammatical errors throughout the article. The very first section mentions her birth date and where she was born, but the same is mentioned in the next section. Try to mention it once. The Career section has some information about her education, which you could make a separate section for if there is enough information to. Also, the first section mentions her career, which is information that you could add to the Career section. When mentioning her artwork and describing it, don't use past tense. For example, if it says something like "the artwork had...", you would instead say "the artwork has... Using past tense makes it seem as though the artwork does not exist anymore, but it still may exist. You can use past tense when saying "it is made of...". Lastly, the Career and Exhibitions section should be the references. Besides that you're making good progress, and don't forget to add more citations. :)