User talk:Mark Anthony Molloy

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Hi Mark~
：） --ChaoDOU (talk) 11:01, 7 March 2013 (UTC)

Hello
Welcome to the Wiki project!!! :-) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Beata Steinberg (talk • contribs) 06:29, 14 March 2013 (UTC)

Exercise Two
Hi Dennis,

I have critically evaluated KMEHR on the talk page.

I have reviewed :


 * PCEHR
 * NEHTA
 * SNOWMED
 * EHR
 * Diagnosis Codes

I am hoping to do my wiki page on PCEHR.

Mark Anthony Molloy (talk) 21:58, 31 March 2013 (UTC)

Comments on PCEHR article
This is a very comprehensive article which deals with the contemporary issue of Personally Controlled EHR recently introduced in Australia, and not yet reflected on Wiki. It is well written and it is based on the objective and current information. The article is well structured by its headings, subheadings, bulleted and numbered lists. Most information is well referenced and linked to the internal and external sources/pages. The article would benefit from including further references to some of its sections, for example NASH PKI section, PCEHR JAC ,IAC and IHI sections. Some of the references are not aligned with text, for example references 17 to 20 should be moved just after the text. In the very first paragraph, it would be better to include PCEHR acronym in brackets, and the first heading should read Rationale rather than Rational. Overall, it is a well researched article and it will make a valuable contribution to the Wiki encyclopedia. Beata Steinberg (talk) 08:23, 19 May 2013 (UTC)

Thank you for your constructive feedback I agree with your comments and will rectify the article in the coming days. Mark Anthony Molloy (talk) 12:08, 19 May 2013 (UTC)

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Peer Review for PCEHR
Wow Mark, I'm really impressed with the detail you placed into this article. I actually, during the summer, helped GPs register for their HPI-I, HPI-O's and NASH keys with NeHTA. I think I may have some registration forms still left over. If you'd like, I can send the forms over to you, for your interest or further reading/input into the PCEHR article.

Anyway, back to the review; the content is remarkably similar to what I've received during the training session with NeHTA, except you covered a lot more than what I was told. It's a very well thought through article with a variety of topics covered in regard to the PCEHR, not much else I can say except that it would be beneficial to maybe provide examples of some vendors or expert systems that are PCEHR compatible or which aren't.

Good work (Y) Vsikiric (talk) 08:30, 24 May 2013 (UTC)

Update
Hi everyone, I have implemented all of your recommendations and changes to the article so there are now more references, the ambiguos links have been fixed or removed (the TalkBot asked for that) and a section on Vendors has been included (was going to do this origionally but forgot in the grand scheme so thanks for the reminder Vito) although it's not expansive as I couldn't find too much info on it. Vito I will take you up on your offer of the forms as after putting so much time into this I'm hooked :)

Cheers for the fantastic feedback! Mark Anthony Molloy (talk) 00:34, 26 May 2013 (UTC)

Hi Mark
Yes. i'm enrolled in HIM5IHC. with regards to your article, i do not have issues with your articles i actually admire your work. however, wiki was not allowing me to edit my article and this happened accidentally. i don't understand how and why it happened i think it is some kind of restriction. my apologies for this.

Thanks , Mai

Thanks for the response Mai, I changed the PCEHR back to my version, your article is still in there if you need to retrieve it. You just need to go to the "view history" tab on the PCEHR page and then select he last version you did, you can then copy it and go to the page you wish for it to be on select edit and paste it into the section you want it to be in.

Cheers,

Mark Anthony Molloy (talk) 22:40, 9 June 2013 (UTC)