User talk:Mark smith81

"Better English"
Hello. Thanks for you contribution, but unfortunately, [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Cyclone_Chapala&diff=689145565&oldid=689136127 this edit] introduced worse English by making the sentence a run-on sentence. Please double-check your spelling and grammar in the future. Thanks.--Jasper Deng (talk) 15:41, 5 November 2015 (UTC)