User talk:Markmaldwyn

Welcome!

Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few good links for newcomers: I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your name on talk pages using four tildes (~&#126;); this will automatically produce your name and the date. If you have any questions, check out Where to ask a question or ask me on my talk page. Again, welcome!
 * The five pillars of Wikipedia
 * How to edit a page
 * Help pages
 * Tutorial
 * How to write a great article
 * Manual of Style

Jackie Lee
This is just my opinion, this article reads like a review. There are too many pov statements and too much passive voice. Also please don't specify an email address as an external link. There are no other sources cited for this article, so please provide them. TheRingess 19:16, 28 December 2005 (UTC)