User talk:Marltaly9990/Fifth disease/Wiesebc3532 Peer Review

Your sources do support your claims and all the information seems to be up-to-date. The tone overall is very neutral. I think the sentences could be less choppy and a little longer. The wording could also be stronger. See if there are any numbers to add to this disease about how easy to contract and the increased risk during pregnancy, this could help with strengthening a couple of the sentences. It could be longer and I think the lengthening of the sentences will help with that. The information is very good and there is no bias, there are no viewpoints that are overwhelming. Overall, a good start/draft. Wiesebc3532 (talk) 15:20, 19 November 2021 (UTC)Wiesebc3532