User talk:Marnold23/Iryna Ethell

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Hi, here are my thoughts about your sandbox:
 * In general, all content on Wikipedia should be referenced. If consecutive sentences come from the same source, the citation can be added once at the end of the consecutive sentences rather than duplicated at the end of each sentence. In that vein, no paragraph should end without a citation, and no paragraphs should lack citations. I a paragraph without citations, which is a red flag. Where does this content come from? How will the reader know it's verifiable?
 * I think the article is not quite clear as to how the subject is notable. This would be a good addition to the lead. Has she been recognized as a leading researcher? Has someone important called her work promising or impactful? We want to make sure it's really clear that Ethell meets Wikipedia's notability criteria, otherwise, the article could be deleted.
 * You'll want to look at the specific notability criteria for scientists and academics to determine how you'll attempt to establish notability in your article.

I think your biggest priority moving forward is chewing over the notabillity criteria for scientists and determining how you will ensure your article meets the Wikipedia guidelines! Thanks, Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:37, 1 June 2020 (UTC)