User talk:MarsKong

Market power
Thank you for expanding market power. I made some changes to the mergers of competing buyers section which may look a bit startling. They aren't meant as criticism of your work, but as steps in improving the article. At the top, you'll see a note that the section currently deals with the subject in the US. Because Wikipedia has a global audience, we try to cover subjects like this with views from a variety of countries and regions. Of course you only just wrote it; it's quite possible that an editor will come along and add a section on another area. Or perhaps you'll decide to expand it with views from other parts of the world. There's no deadline. The note at the end of the first paragraph which says 'Improper synthesis?' is there because I couldn't find clear sources for that bit. The Yale Law Review said "Historically, buyer power issues were at the root of some of the earliest antitrust cases and have remained a continuous, but under-appreciated component of antitrust case law over the years," but that's not the same as "most fundamental". I wasn't sure what you meant by "On the Delphic declaration in the 1992 Guidelines, we need to hire a third agency to evaluate whether the buyers are eligible to improve the market buyer power," but you'll want to rephrase it to avoid using "we". I hope I've not scared you off: You're doing very well! If you have any questions, you can ask me here (I'll keep your talk page on my watchlist for a while), or visit the Teahouse, our help forum for new editors. Happy editing! BlackcurrantTea (talk) 22:49, 1 November 2020 (UTC)