User talk:Marshall90/sandbox

Marshall,

I don't believe Interfaith Youth Core is a "Corporation," but an organization, a non-profit organization. You may have meant "Interfaith Youth Cooperation" in the outline box. (Conner Baldwin, Campus Ambassador in Training Yjx2ic35 (talk) 21:40, 28 February 2013 (UTC)Yjx2ic35Yjx2ic35 (talk) 21:40, 28 February 2013 (UTC)

Second comment: I'm looking at the President's Challenge and the Campuses Are... You've made some conclusions that may be possible, given the evidence, but not proven. Welcome to the challenge of academic writing. For instance, just how diverse is Schreiner? Not all campuses take part in community service, though many, if not most, do. The accuracy of your conclusions then become suspect. Restate as possibilities and directions. Your sources are good, but remember they have a purpose to pursue, an axe to grind (so to speak). Conner Baldwin 97.79.137.31 (talk) 23:31, 28 February 2013 (UTC)yjxic3597.79.137.31 (talk) 23:31, 28 February 2013 (UTC)