User talk:MarthaDaisy

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Potential conflict of interest
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Please take a few moments to read and review Wikipedia's policies regarding conflicts of interest, especially those pertaining to neutral point of view, sourcing and autobiographies. Thank you. Cordless Larry (talk) 08:09, 31 March 2017 (UTC)

Your recent edits
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Thank you. --SineBot (talk) 08:15, 31 March 2017 (UTC)

Solved!

AfC notification: Draft:Alice Waddington has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Alice Waddington. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 22:52, 31 March 2017 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Alice Waddington has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Alice Waddington. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 10:19, 1 April 2017 (UTC)

Thank you! I have tried to reduce the number of sources cited as much as possible to avoid bombarding and will be submitting the article for review tomorrow. Wish me good luck!

Marthadaisy MarthaDaisy (talk) 00:16, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

Your draft about Alice Waddington.
Hi MarthaDaisy. I'm not an AfC reviewer, but I saw your post at the Teahouse. After glancing over your draft, I noticed a couple of things: (1) You have embedded some external links into the body of the article; (2) you've added footnotes to section headings; and (3) the large number of sources being cited.

The first "problem" is not really in accordance with WP:CS and WP:EL. This is something which can be fixed fairly easily by simply formatting the embedded link as a footnote if it's meant to be used that way; adding it as an external link if it doesn't fall under WP:ELNO; converting it to a wikilink if a stand-alone article exists for the target page; or simply removing the embedded link altogether if none of the other suggestions work.

The second "problem" is not really recommended per MOS:HEAD, but it is also a fairly easy fix: simply move the footnote to the appropriate location within the relevant section.

The third "problem" is more difficult to fix and requires that you actually go through and re-check each and every citation for relevance. Fifty-two citations is not excessive if they all are relevant and absolutely needed for verifying article content. However, there is a tendency for some new editors creating an article for the first time that "more is always better" when it many cases the opposite may be the case for the reasons explained in WP:BOMBARD. Too much infomration can make it harder for reviewers to sort through everything and assess the Wikipedia notability of the subject. Too much detail is also not really needed for the reasons explained in WP:NOTEVERYTHING. You may actually be able to improve the draft by removing the excessive detail and focusing on the content that establishes Waddington's Wikipedia notablility, and the sources which show that she has received significant coverage in reliable sources that WP:BIO requires.

Finally, since you are writing about someone associated with the filmmaking, you might find some helpful information at Wikipedia:WikiProject Actors and Filmmakers. You can also ask questions or for advice on the projects talk page. -- Marchjuly (talk) 11:31, 1 April 2017 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Alice Waddington has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Alice Waddington. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 19:35, 9 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Please will you stop repeatedly removing the comments at the top of the draft it is NOT helpful. Theroadislong (talk) 20:15, 9 April 2017 (UTC)

I just saw this too! Again, sorry for removing the comments on the draft, thought it was neccesary for submission I feel terrible aaah thank you for the heads up MarthaDaisy (talk) 20:44, 9 April 2017 (UTC) Marthadaisy

April 2017
Please do not remove content or templates from pages on Wikipedia, as you did to Draft:Alice Waddington, without giving a valid reason for the removal in the edit summary. Your content removal does not appear to be constructive and has been reverted. If you only meant to make a test edit, please use the sandbox for that. You have been repeatedly asked NOT to remove comments, PLEASE stop Theroadislong (talk) 20:20, 9 April 2017 (UTC)

Oh no, I had no idea I had been noticed before!! I thought I need to remove them for submission of my draft. So sorry if it came across as disrespectful, I am still a bit lost on how wikipedia works as a whole and trying to learn. Thanks for the heads up!

Marthadaisy MarthaDaisy (talk) 20:25, 9 April 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alice Waddington has been accepted
 Alice Waddington, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! SwisterTwister  talk  03:51, 13 April 2017 (UTC)
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