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Instructor Comments: This is a good beginning. Make sure you have at leasts 5 sources (2 of which should be scholarly) and that you use them to back up all of the claims that you make. Make sure your citations are made using Wikipedia's citation function so that they show up correctly. Also make sure you are not "close paraphrasing" (remember: close paraphrasing is still a form of plagiarism). When you make your final contribution it should be at least 400 words and should be organized into coherent paragraphs with clearly stated topic sentences and supporting details.