User talk:Marvel1323

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Hello, Marvel1323, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback
Nice start on your article draft. It would be helpful if you could add some links to other articles. Anything that the average reader would be unfamiliar with should probably be linked, so readers can learn more about the topic if they aren't already familiar with it. Also your reference #1 is incomplete. EBSCOhost is a search company that lets subscribers search a number of different databases (mostly journal articles). The links you provided are only accessible to people who are logged in through your university's library. The rest of us have no clue what the full citation is. You might try to automatically generate a reference using the DOI, if the article has one. Failing that, you should fill out the reference template manually. (If you reply to this message here, please include  in your response, to ensure that I see your reply.) Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:02, 22 November 2016 (UTC)