User talk:Marvgarc/sandbox

John Richerson: Second Peer Review
Hello Group Eight, it looks like you’ve found some places in your article, "New Economic Policy", that could use some improving and are working on filling those gaps, great job. I compared the sections under Javier and Marvin’s names to the article on Wikipedia and, as of now, there are no differences between them that I could tell. I’m not sure if it’s because you’ve already moved the edits live or haven’t started editing the sections yet. I did notice your group seems to have made numerous changes on your article live already so maybe that’s the case. In addition, I only noticed one source on your sandbox, however on your articles’ revision history I noticed you’ve added some that are already live. It was difficult to tell the exact number of sources your group has added, but I think I counted around four. If the actual number is higher, great. If it’s not, you might consider trying to add a few more, if possible. Also, I think it’s a great plan to expand on the “Disagreements in leadership” section as noted under Jessica’s section. I noticed the article is asking for that to be done on the live page. The source listed under Jessica’s section also seems really quality. Great work! My final thought is perhaps it would be a good idea to add some more visual elements to the article? Some photographs might be found on Wikipedia Creative Commons. Even simple things like photos of Lenin and Stalin or the Soviet flag could really make the page more engaging. Here is one I found you might consider: https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Stalin_Lenin_jk.jpg Also, maybe showing the economic data in graph form could help with audience understanding? This is a very complex and important article you’ve chosen, and it was a pleasure reviewing it. Keep up the good work! (Jrichers (talk) 10:10, 17 February 2019 (UTC))