User talk:Marvinno47

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (July 13)
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Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 09:17, 13 July 2024 (UTC)


 * I've since added more citations and references. Could you review my updates before my next submission to avoid risking page deletion?
 * Thank you Marvinno47 (talk) 10:38, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Peaceland University (July 15)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:28, 15 July 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your previous feedback regarding my draft submission for Peaceland University. I have carefully reviewed your comments and made the necessary revisions. Specifically, I have:
 * Added multiple published sources that are in-depth, reliable, secondary, and strictly independent of the subject.
 * Ensured the references meet all the criteria you outlined.
 * Rewritten the submission in a formal, encyclopedic tone, removing any promotional language and ensuring neutrality.
 * Could you kindly review the updated draft to ensure it now meets Wikipedia's requirements before I resubmit?
 * Thank you for your assistance. Marvinno47 (talk) 16:25, 15 July 2024 (UTC)