User talk:MaryGrace J. Larsen

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Hello, MaryGrace J. Larsen, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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bromomethane edits review
This user only added information to existing sections of the page. The information included in the section "preparation" seems to correspond with the section "occurrence and manufacture" from the original article. Perhaps occurrence and manufacture should be separated into 2 categories. Safety section is new. Mention of carcinogenicity of compound is unreferenced and would belong in the "health effects" section. The safety section should be cited or removed. All other information is thoroughly and accurately cited. Information added to 4 different sections, so balanced coverage was achieved. The safety section mentions that the compound "exposure to them should be minimized." this statement could be biased, especially without supporting references. All other content appears to be neutral. References come from reliable sources. Jasmineburke (talk) 14:15, 4 March 2021 (UTC)