User talk:Mary Henrietta Graham

Your submission at Articles for creation: Detroit Study Club (May 18)
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etothepi 👽 (u)&bull;(t) 21:01, 18 May 2018 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Detroit Study Club has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Detroit Study Club. Thanks! Bkissin (talk) 21:52, 18 May 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Detroit Study Club (September 17)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by NotTheFakeJTP was:

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Your submission at Articles for creation
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Mary Henrietta Graham (talk) 23:46, 16 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi NotTheFakeJTP,

Thanks so much for your feedback. I have resubmitted the article with substantial changes. I used the Rosenwald Schools as an example to fix my language and substantially shorten the article to only include essential information for an impartial encyclopedia entry.

"We" refers to a professor that I worked with to gather information for this project. Neither of us have any formal affiliations with the Detroit Study Club. I am the only one with access to my account and that can edit the article.

Hopefully this new version meets expectations. I look forward to receiving feedback.

Thank you.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Detroit Study Club has been accepted
 Detroit Study Club, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Bkissin (talk) 18:36, 21 December 2018 (UTC)
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