User talk:Maryamgreen

December 2009
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Mansoureh Shojaee
All sorts of problems here.


 * Much of the article was written as lists instead of a proper article, and seemed to be a random selection of not particularly important fact. It read like a CV or form. Why is it significant enough to list that she is married, has a son and a BA?
 * There are no links to other Wikipedia articles, and no independent verifiable sources, so it is impossible to check the facts or establish whether either the article's subject or the organisations (eg The Women Cultural Center, Organization of Survival Activists etc.) meet the notability guidelines. Similarly with cultural contributions.
 * We are told she wrote articles and books, but no titles are given, let alone full details (publisher, journal, isbn etc)
 * There are a number of accusations against the Iranian state. These may be true, but we need independent sources such as newspaper reports to support these claims.
 * This is an encyclopaedia, not a platform for a campaign or a "reference for her petitions". This unfortunate woman may well merit an article, but it should be properly referenced and neutral

 Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  19:07, 5 January 2010 (UTC)