User talk:Maryannelindemann/Ethics of torture/HarryJL Peer Review

Thank you for your feed back on my edits! I appreciate the fact that you left specific suggestions, rather than general ones.

I agree with your suggestion about adding a specific year to when it was legal in Israel to torture, and I will definitely be changing my wording of that sentence to something more along the lines of what you suggested.

I will have to look more into the basis of the deontological arguments for/against torture, and see whether or not it fits in with the content of the article in an unbiased way.

Thanks again for your suggestions! Maryannelindemann (talk) 23:39, 3 October 2021 (UTC)