User talk:Maskewmo/Saponification

The leading sentence isn't very clear, but brief. The content of this article is relevant but the background chemistry should be explained more between the mechanisms. The viewpoints are good but underrated. Usually when saponification is looked up, readers want detailed information about sap.#, measurements, mixtures and pictures. That information will be very helpful to the readers because natural soaps are trending and readers are/will be interested in making soap. Fats are made up of fatty acids and the two sections are separated, combining those sections together and going into detail on fats and oils will help the readers understand what a fat is exactly. The oil paint section is good, but it isn't relevant to the production soap. The source aren't very reliable and some of them didn't work. Maskewmo (talk) 21:35, 6 February 2021 (UTC)Maskewmo