User talk:Master Bari,Makorshi

Your submission at Articles for creation: Makorshi (August 23)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by JamesBWatson was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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The editor who uses the pseudonym "JamesBWatson" (talk) 20:17, 23 August 2018 (UTC)

Use of talk pages
A Wikipedia talk page is for messages and discussions about work for the encyclopaedia: it is not a place to post material unrelated to work for Wikipedia. The editor who uses the pseudonym "JamesBWatson" (talk) 17:10, 25 August 2018 (UTC)