User talk:Mat280

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Hello, Mat280, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Shimulo2 (talk) 22:49, 20 October 2017 (UTC)

Reviewing FLS2 article
Hi there,

Thank you for your contribution to wikipedia. The article is written concisely and the word chosen wisely though has more room for improvements. I could not find any turn or any phrase that can describe the subject in a clear way, incase, the subject is a gene. I think, you haven't complete your article and trying to do improvement. Here is some suggestions from me
 * 1) Give a good Title of the article that should be paraphrase your content
 * 2) Please include some wikilink (I have  included some)
 * 3) Develop your content as it looks like underdevelopment
 * 4) Most Importantly You can divede your article in severel sections so that the readers can focus on specific content
 * 5) Please include gene family as it needs in wikiarticle when you edit an article that focus on gene
 * 6) You can write your lead section more precisely and also seperately as your article looks witout lead sections
 * 7) Use italic form to write the gene and scientific name
 * 8) Your article has not sufficient references. Please add more reliable references
 * 9) Overall Your article looks like rudimentary so you have plenty of options to develop.
 * 10) The writing style of your article is good which can I use in my article

Thank you. Please leave feedback of my article and I will hihgly appreciate. If you have any questions about my review please let me know.

Shimulo2 (talk) 22:49, 20 October 2017 (UTC)