User talk:Mat280/FLS 2

Reviewing FLS2 article
Hi there,

Thank you for your contribution to wikipedia. The article is written concisely and the word chosen wisely though has more room for improvements. I could not find any turn or any phrase that can describe the subject in a clear way, incase, the subject is a gene. I think, you haven't complete your article and trying to do improvement. Here is some suggestions from me Give a good Title of the article that should be paraphrase your content
 * 1) Please include some wikilink (I have  included some)
 * 2) Develop your content as it looks like underdevelopment
 * 3) Most Importantly You can divede your article in severel sections so that the readers can focus on specific content
 * 4) Please include gene family as it needs in wikiarticle when you edit an article that focus on gene
 * 5) You can write your lead section more precisely and also seperately as your article looks witout lead sections
 * 6) Use italic form to write the gene and scientific name
 * 7) Your article has not sufficient references. Please add more reliable references
 * 8) Overall Your article looks like rudimentary so you have plenty of options to develop.
 * 9) The writing style of your article is good which can I use in my article

Thank you. Please leave feedback of my article and I will hihgly appreciate. If you have any questions about my review please let me know. Shimulo2 (talk) 22:50, 20 October 2017 (UTC)