User talk:Matchabae/Religion and alcohol

Improvement
Hi, please drop down any suggestions to improve this article. Thank you so much! Matchabae (talk) 05:15, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Updates
Hi, in this article I have added additional information specifically in the introduction, Jewish, Christian, Islam, and Health section. Aside from adding information, I have also created another section entitled "Consumption of Alcohol and Religious Affiliation in the United States." I am open to any suggestion that might help me improve my skills in this. So please feel free to write down any inputs even when it is just a small input. I wanted to add that all addition I made that are planned to be posted in the live article is the one in bold. Thank you so much! Matchabae (talk) 04:44, 15 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi Matchabae, I have read through your article and done my peer review. Your added contents really improves the article to another level! I have left some of my feedbacks in the peer review. Hope it helps! Acaebow1 (talk) 03:06, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi Acaebow1! Thank you so much for the review and compliment! I will totally check it out! Matchabae (talk) 03:07, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

I completed my peer review for Matchabae's article Religion and Alcohol, overall, wonderful job! Comments are in the peer review. Take care! Lunarmoon13 (talk) 19:50, 15 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi Lunarmoon13, thank you so much for the review and compliment! I will check it out!  Matchabae (talk) 01:37, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Move Edits
I have polished my sandbox with the help from the peer review. Along with that, I have published my revision to the live article in wikipedia. Matchabae (talk) 19:35, 22 October 2023 (UTC)