User talk:MathsandStuff

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ralph Gordon Stanton (March 26)
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TopCipher (talk) 17:53, 26 March 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ralph Gordon Stanton has been accepted
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Ralph Gordon Stanton
An almost universal mistake in creation of biographical articles is this: The reasons why the person is so notable that there should be a Wikipedia article about the person should appear at the outset, almost always in the first paragraph and not unusually in the first one or two sentences. One shouldn't just list events of the person's life chronologically so that the person reading the whole article will ultimately find out how the person is notable. Could you edit this article accordingly? Michael Hardy (talk) 22:49, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Also, not that so far, only one other page links to this article. If you know of, or can identify, other pages that should link to it, could you add the links? Michael Hardy (talk) 22:50, 28 March 2017 (UTC)