User talk:MattSchimm/sandbox

Review
This is really nice; a very good example of encyclopedic writing. You've covered all that one would expect from an encyclopedia article, and you've done so in a neutral, unbiased way. A couple of technical notes: Good work. Yunshui 雲 水 07:13, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
 * References should by positioned directly after the period at the end of sentence, with no space between the period and the reference or between separate references (like this: ).
 * The last sentence in the "History" section needs a citation, as does the section on "Recreation".
 * Under "Natural history", it would be nice to know why the lake struggles to generate its own nutrients.
 * For the various heights, lengths, depths etc., you should use the template (click on the link there for instructions on how to format it). For example, , which gives: "The dam is 265 ft high".
 * In a couple of cases you've cited the same reference more than once, you should combine these citations into one reference line (here's how).