User talk:MatthewDBA/Montessori method

Proposed outline looks good
The following sections are much too specific to warrant their own section on the public page


 * Kilpatrick's 1913 Criticism of Montessori
 * Ayn Rand's Praise
 * From Childhood to Adolescence

It would make more sense to implement your structure and include these as sub-topics, or even just as paragraphs in a larger context. For example,


 * Criticism
 * Kilpatrick (c.1913)
 * Other Works
 * From Childhood to Adolescence

... and so on.

Daddy.twins (talk) 16:05, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

another proposal under construction
I applaud your interest in a "revamp" of the page. I too am working on this as well. Please visit my userpage for an examination. There are glaring omissions and much that needs to be clarified to make it a truly useful, accurate article. I would appreciate your comments on how my proposal is coming along. I have only worked on the introduction and history sections so far.Havis1 (talk) 19:23, 16 November 2009 (UTC)