User talk:Mattition

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Hello, Mattition, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer review for William Hannibal Thomas Wikipedia article. This article is missing a lead paragraph. The first sentence is a good start, but more content would be ideal. The “Critics” section that was added is relevant to the article. This addition is a smart way of expanding this work, especially since the critics are mentioned in a previous section. Since this is an article about William Thomas, I would suggest adding more substance to the content directly on him. His early life, career, and death sections seem very thin compared to the “critics” section. This should be less noticeable for the article to be properly balanced. The tone of the added section is neutral, and the sources are trustworthy. The article is organized. The portrait of William Thomas is helpful in putting a face to the name. Adding another photo, perhaps the cover of his book, would not hurt. I would suggest writing a summary for his work “The American Negro.” A summary would probably advance a reader’s comprehension of the “critics” section of the article. Good luck with the article.Ppetriy (talk) 05:21, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review for William Hannibal Thomas Wikipedia page. With this being a newly developed page, I definitely say great job. You are continuously adding edits and information that is crucial to this page’s success. The information was very straight forward and was not biased. However, I would add a few more details and some more information to the biography pages. This would help readers grasp a deeper understanding of his background and history. But, the photo you added is a helpful visual for the readers. Overall, great job on the page!