User talk:Mattrius

October 2008
Welcome to Wikipedia. The recent edit you made to Duck has been reverted, as it appears to be unconstructive. Use the sandbox for testing; if you believe the edit was constructive, ensure that you provide an informative edit summary. You may also wish to read the introduction to editing. Thank you.  Monster Under Your Bed  (talk) 11:14, 24 October 2008 (UTC)

Considering proposals
(Reply to question on User:Richard New Forest) Hi Mattrius - Doesn't it depend on how polite you're being? A direct order would be "consider this proposal" (or even "do it now!"), but that degree of directness would be rude in most circumstances. Adding "please" implies that the reader has a degree of choice, so is more polite. Turning it into a question is I think a way of giving the reader more control, so is still more polite. Further degrees of abasement are of course possible: "I should be most grateful if you could take the time to consider..." etc. It's also possible to be ironic, parcelling up a demand in a nominally polite phrase: "Please consider this proposal, if it is not too much to ask someone as busy as you obviously are". Otherwise, up to you, it depends on the context. Oh, and come on, do brush up your spelling a bit ("sentance"). (Hope this is not too late for your essay...)  Richard New Forest (talk) 16:04, 23 February 2009 (UTC)

Personal statement
Not such a good idea to put lots of personal info on a public site – you never know who might be watching. Probably better to send a direct email.

One general thing: avoid so many half-hearted qualifiers like "fairly". What are you intending to do after college? Your subjects seem a bit broad – very good for general education, but not if you wanted to actually be a scientist, lawyer, psychologist etc, where you'd need to be a good deal more single-minded to get anywhere. Otherwise looks good. End of careers advice. Richard New Forest (talk) 10:37, 30 March 2009 (UTC)