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Subarachnoid hemorrhage
Hi Mattwilliamsefc1,

I reverted your edit to this page as noted in my edit summary because:
 * 1) True, but unsourced
 * 2) Shouldn't be in lead; Maybe a mention in History or a Notable cases sect.

Sourcing, especially regarding a death, is very important. It is unfortunately common for a persons death to be deliberately misreported. It is now public knowledge from many reliable sources that Phillip Hughes has now died, but at least 2 people incorrectly added to his page that he was dead on the day he was hit! Additionally, the wp:lead (or lede) section is meant to be "an introduction to the article and a summary of its most important aspects.", not new information. I also only found out when I edited the page, but Subarachnoid hemorrhage is also a Featured article, making it even more necessary that it is well 'maintained'. Regards, 220  of  Borg 02:42, 28 November 2014 (UTC)


 * I have started a discussion about inclusion of this content at Talk:Subarachnoid hemorrhage.--220  of  Borg 04:18, 28 November 2014 (UTC)