User talk:Matty.007/Archives2013/June

Copy edit feedback
Hi Matty.007. I found a few more things to do on each article. Battle of Lund:
 * The article seems to be using US spelling and dates. In British usage, directions get dashes, but in US usage, they do not. So "south-east" becomes "southeast"
 * Link only on first occurrence (once in the lead and once in the body)
 * Directions such as north and south do not get capital letters
 * I switched all times to military times, since the article is about a battle
 * Six uses of the word "however" is too many in an article this size
 * You can review this for additional changes I made.

Battle of Tolbiac:
 * Phrases such as "it is said" and "we are told" should be removed. Either we trust the sources, or we don't.
 * More commas were added
 * Link on first occurrence
 * You can review this for additional changes I made.

Hopefully you find these comments useful to further your copy editing skills! Best, -- User:Diannaa (talk) 02:35, 18 June 2013 (UTC)


 * But apart from that, were they good for first attempts?


 * Thanks, Mat  ty  .  007  16:03, 18 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, I thought so. Keep up the good work! -- Diannaa (talk) 18:32, 18 June 2013 (UTC)


 * OK, thanks. Mat  ty  .  007  06:32, 19 June 2013 (UTC)