User talk:Mauriziok/Mister International

Neutrality Check
I feel this article needs less emotional and less biased language. Expressions such as "countless young men all over the world vying to be the Mister International titleholder" are more suitable for an advertisement than an encyclopedia. The sentence is, in any case, exaggerated and incorrect. Another of many possible examples "ingrained in the landscape of our minds. He continues to stand proud..." - too emotional and personal.