User talk:MaxFactorFamilyMuseum/Max factor family

Welcome, but...
Hi, and Welcome to Wikipedia. However... before I tag your userpage for spam, might I suggest you compare your wording with that of other articles? I think you'll find a wide difference. Also, with regards to 'maintaining and monitoring', no-one 'owns' a page and anyone can edit. Once a page is up and running, anyone can add info - which may not always be to the taste of the creator. If it is reliably sourced, you can't remove it without better sourced material (and a discussion). I'll give you a few days to have a go at revising - and will give advice if required (assuming I'm at home - I won't tag immediately before going away...). Peridon (talk) 22:57, 2 April 2010 (UTC)

Peridon, Thank you for examining the page I added. I am new at this. I am not interested in using this for spam in any way. The title of the page should read Max Factor Family Museum only. I thought to include a few things relating to the M.F. Family Foundation, as well as, news relating to this higher profile family.

Are you the "contact person" for this page in the future? I appreciate your assistance. I'm standing by... : ) —Preceding unsigned comment added by MaxFactorFamilyMuseum (talk • contribs) 02:50, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

There's no official 'contact person' - I just do a lot of monitoring of things that the tools used by most editors don't seem to reach. User pages and talk pages seem to be missed. I think there could be notability in the subject - but do please compare your wording with that of others. The article does really sound promotional as it stands. Looking again, most appears to be a quote. Quotes can be used in small doses, but not as the bulk of the article. Quotes in "quotes", as it were, are OK to tell what someone said, but the article should be in your own words for just here. Even if you wrote the thing quoted.... Don't worry about the title for now. That can be sorted when a move to main space is made. Peridon (talk) 15:54, 3 April 2010 (UTC)