User talk:Max melstrom

Changes in Cadillac article
Nice changes.

I was pleased to see the addition of the highway links. If you go to Traverse City, Michigan or Grayling, Michigan you might find a useful model on using the route information, and putting in something that explains what those roads do. Just a thought.

Best regards. 7&amp;6=thirteen (talk) 19:10, 4 January 2008 (UTC)Stan


 * Thanks Stan, you have encouraged me to revise the Cadillac site a bit. Your suggestions are helpful.  Max, 4 January 2008


 * Given how you have described Cadillac as a winter destination (nice job there), you might put in a sentence or two and a link in the Northern Michigan. The winter section in that article is one of its weaker parts.  7&amp;6=thirteen (talk) 13:13, 5 January 2008 (UTC)Stan


 * You have real local subject matter expertise, and it shows. Bravo!  Really awesome job transforming his article.  Best regards, 7&amp;6=thirteen (talk) 02:30, 6 January 2008 (UTC)Stan


 * Hi Max, just took a look at the Cadillac article at GA noms and, sorry to say this, but the lead is way too short - see WP:LEAD. For the length of your article, it needs to be at least three longish paragraphs which "should adequately summarize the article." There are also a few Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers) problems too. Looks good though, apart from this!-- seahamlass  22:24, 3 July 2008 (UTC)

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