User talk:Maxabisia/sandbox

Djbodyroll/sandbox Peer Review

I think this is a great start. Industrial manufacturing is a good example of an application for mixed reality. I think adding some more information to back up the claims will be helpful. I think the tone is neutral, which is good, and the information is recent.

Are you planning on editing other sections or just this one? I would make sure it is up to par with the other application sections.

The end seems a little odd to me, is there another way you could represent the bulleted list?