User talk:Maxence FilmStudies

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Peer review
Hey Maxence!

My name is Rita and I chose to review your article. Your article is great so far. You probably were already going to do this, but you could add two headings: "Early Life" and "Career". For Bradley King's early life paragraph, you can just discuss her life before working as a screenwriter, and then write about everything when she started writing in the "Career" paragraph. Other than that, the rest is well done, keep up the good work!

RitaRitanour (talk) 23:27, 15 March 2016 (UTC)