User talk:Maxwell1998/sandbox

I recommend removing the review section as you want to inform your audience rather than persuade them. Also, check for grammar. Gonzalezj229 (talk) 14:49, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

I recommend adding in a heading for your references to seperate them as it looks like they're a part of your award section as they're underneath that heading. Gonzalezj229 (talk) 14:52, 26 April 2018 (UTC) I would recommend to delete the "plot/synopsis" part from your first heading and just leave it as the name of the game. Gonzalezj229 (talk) 14:55, 26 April 2018 (UTC)